Numbers by Rachel Ward
Release Date: February 1, 2010
Publisher: Chicken House/Scholastic Inc.
Pages: 325
Reading level: Young Adult
Synopsis
Ever since she was child, Jem has kept a secret: Whenever she meets someone new, no matter who, as soon as she looks into their eyes, a number pops into her head. That number is a date: the date they will die. Burdened with such awful awareness, Jem avoids relationships. Until she meets Spider, another outsider, and takes a chance. The two plan a trip to the city. But while waiting to ride the Eye ferris wheel, Jem is terrified to see that all the other tourists in line flash the same number. Today's number. Today's date. Terrorists are going to attack London. Jem's world is about to explode!
-- from Goodreads.com
Review (Contains Spoilers)
I'll be honest & say up front that I did not finish this book. This review is based on the first half, almost exactly & that is as far as I got before I didn't want to read any more of it. It started off really well. I loved the entire idea of the story & the set up of the characters was pretty good. They were earthy, well-described kids from inner-city London & they felt very real to me. I could appreciate the roughness around their edges because of their backgrounds & upbringings. It all made sense to me.
The idea of the numbers, of being able to see the date someone is going to die by looking in their eyes, was pretty inventive. I hadn't seen any other book like it before & it definitely started out with some great instances of the numbers causing Jem distress as she sees them in the eyes of everyone from her drug addicted mother to her new best friend & possible love interest to everyone waiting in line to board the London Eye before a tragedy strikes.
Jem's world "explodes," as the synopsis above states, about one quarter of the way through the book. Then the two characters go on the run, afraid that they are going to be blamed for the incident they narrowly escaped thanks to Jem's gift. Which is when the plot ends, the numbers cease to be of any consequence, & we become immersed in the raw essence at the bottom of the barrel for both Jem & Spider.
Neither of the teens has any sense of how to make it on the run. Spider steals cars & picks fights with other motorists while speeding down the road, bringing far too much unwanted attention to them but he can't seem to help it. Jem whines incessantly & takes every single thing Spider says to her as a reason to start a fight. For the rest of the portion of the book that I read it was basically a non-stop exercise in pure frustration as I watched the characters who treat each other like their least favorite brother or sister somehow manage to discover they are in love & have sex. No plot. No numbers. No character development. Just hormones & fights & really bad dialogue. I had enough & put it down when it felt like it was never going to end or if it did end I wasn't going to care what happened to the characters anymore.
I can't say what happened through the rest of the book. Maybe it was fantastic in the second half but I didn't like having to slog through to get to it. I would recommend this book to people who are not averse to threadbare plots when excitement is promised. Perhaps this book was meant to only be a slice of life but the publishers needed to market it differently to get more sales, I don't know. The writing was pretty good. The story, when there was some, was good too. It just wasn't for me.
My Rating: 
